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YAHREH : GINA FINDS A NOTE

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YAHREH: GINA AND THE SILVER CHALICE In Captive Deliverance, Gina is contacted by the FBI through a note. The note didn’t tell her who was watching her, but reading the note was enough. Read this excerpt of YAHREH to see what happens next. YAHREH, screenplay *** FS GINA TO CU OF THE NOTE FLOATING TO THE FLOOR Gina is sitting in her living room reading a book about Yellowstone National Park. She thumbs through a few pages when a piece of paper falls to the floor. MS GINA Gina leans down to pick up the note and reads it. OVER THE SHOULDER ZOOM TO ECU OF THE NOTE YAHREH : GINA FINDS A NOTE    MCU GINA Gina reads the note several times. Then she starts to cry. She lifts her head with tears in her eyes, GINA: “Thank God!” MS GINA TO FS CAMERA BACKING She sits the book on the table next to her and gets up holding the note. She walks over to the entertainment center and picks up a silver chalice. She walks toward the kitchen. FS

YAHREH : THE HEAVENLY REALM OF GOD

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CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE is  a Christian Crime Drama. Yahreh ( yah'rea ) name, A friend of God. YAHREH is the screenplay of Captive Deliverance and registered with Writers Guild of America West. YAHREH, screenplay *** EXT. - FS GINA'S CAR DRIVING DOWN THE ROAD Birds singing quietly in the background while the camera follows the car through the countryside. CONTINUE GINA'S VOICE OVER : "My Mother and real Dad divorced when I was six years old. From that moment on, I did not exist in my Dad's eyes. My Dad called me by my Mother's name. The only thing that saved me was the things GOD told me. My first encounter with God was when I was nine years old. I was riding my bike and was involved in some kind of accident." FADE IN, SUPER IMPOSED OVER THE ORIGINAL SCENE FS OF A MAN CARRYING A YOUNG UNCONSCIOUS GINA TOWARD HER CHILDHOOD HOME CONTINUE GINA’S VOICE OVER : "When one of our neighbors found me, I was unconscious and in shock. This

YAHREH : SMALL OPENING AND A SECRET DOOR

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CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE  is a Christian Crime Drama. YAHREH is the screenplay of CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE and registered with Writers Guild of America West . In this excerpt from the screenplay YAHREH , a SWAT team advances through the house. *** INT. CAL & TINA’S HOME – DEN FS DEN - MAIN ENTRANCE SWAT Agents inch their way into the den. They advance slowly and cautiously from two different directions. FS DEN - SECOND ENTRANCE Making hand movements, they advance. FS TINA Tina is face to the floor, hands covering her head, still screaming in the middle of the room. FS BASEMENT STAIRS, FROM THE BASEMENT LOOKING UP Cal sprints down the basement stairs. FS BASEMENT Cal runs across the vacant room toward a wall with shelving. Old paint cans and other utility type items placed precariously on the shelving. FS DEN Tina is still screaming. A SWAT Agent taps her on the back. She stops screaming. FS TINA She raises her hands and looks up, frightened. MS

THE CASE OF THE BLACK PEARL RING: COURTROOM DRAMA

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In CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE, Gina's perpetrators are caught. In the sequel, she is the main witness in the courtroom trial. The Case of the Black Pearl Ring Laveda D. Rockford 2019 *** ES/ COURT HOUSE FS/ COURTROOM PROSECUTING ATTORNEY: Gina is sitting behind the divider on the stand as a witness. The Prosecuting Attorney is asking her questions.  “Gina, who raped you?” GINA: Gina points to Caldera Drool, aka: Cal. “He did!” MS / TO MCU / OVER THE SHOULDER TWO-SHOT Cal answered by shaking his head back and forth. And when he started to open his mouth, Gina beat him to the punch.  GINA: “You raped me, stole from me, and now you’re lying to cover it up.”   MS COURTROOM/EYE-LEVEL There is a simultaneous gasp in the courtroom. People start talking about the accusations.   FS/ WORM’S EYE-VIEW  JUDGE: The Judge slammed the gavel against the sound rock,  “Oder in the court.” Slamming the gavel against the sound rock a second time, he says