YAHREH : A GOOD DAY AFTER ALL

In the previous excerpt from my screenplay YAHREH, FBI Special Agent Wade Hamilton and his team spent the night rounding up the Black Bloods hired to kill Gina. 

Wade watches Gina until she leaves for work the next morning, then heads to the FBI rental house to get some sleep. 

The screenplay of Captive Deliverance : A Christian mystery thriller
YAHREH : A CHRISTIAN MYSTERY THRILLER 

YAHREH : A GOOD DAY AFTER ALL

***
INT. FBI RENTAL HOUSE

FS FRONT ROOM FBI RENTAL HOUSE

Juan walks to Wade's door with a phone in his hand.

MS JUAN WALKING UP TO THE DOOR

He lifts his hand to knock on the door. He knocks on the door loudly.

JUAN :
"Boss, get up. Bill is on the line. He said he called your cell phone for the past hour and you didn't answer. He left three messages. He wants to talk to you."

MS THROUGH THE DOOR / FS INTO WADE'S ROOM

Wade wakes up and grabs his cellphone and turns it on. He jumps out of bed and sprints to open the door.

MS JUAN

Juan hands him the phone.

MS WADE

Wade closes the door.

WADE :
"Yea Bill, what's up?"

MS BILL SITTING AT HIS DESK, FBI HEADQUARTER

BILL :
"You sound bad, Wade! Maybe this will make you feel better. During our interrogation sessions with the scumbag Jim, he revealed the network dealings and the accomplices in the video. I have different agencies ready to apprehend the suspects. The arrests will take place at the same time. We are going to get them Wade, thanks to you and your team."

MS WADE

WADE :
"That’s great! When are you going to pick them up?"

MS BILL

BILL :
"It's set up for 2:00PM. And that's not all. The Black Bloods missing seventh man..."

WADE :
"Yea."

BILL :
"He was picked up for a parole violation the day before yesterday. That's why you only have six men. The seventh man must have been the owner of the boat. They hired him for the boat."

MS WADE

WADE :
"Wow! I can't wait to tell the team."

MS BILL

BILL :
"I'll let you know how things go. Stay vigilant. You know how these things are. Anything can happen but we hope for the best. We'll talk later."

MS WADE

Bill disconnected the line. Wade ran his fingers through his hair and smiled.

WADE :
"It's going to be a good day after all."

***

YAHREH is the screenplay of CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE and registered with Writers Guild of America West.

CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE is a Christian mystery thriller.

© 2012 Laveda D. Rockford
© 2018 Laveda D. Rockford
     Dallas, Texas
Location: Far North Dallas, Dallas, TX, USA

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