YAHREH : SLIVERS OF LIGHT
In the previous excerpt, FBI Agents are in position to confront the Black Bloods hired to kill Gina. FBI Agent Cindy was in the middle of a scuffle with Trip.
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Women usually didn’t have the upper hand in cases like this. But with all the martial arts classes and boxing she did for entertainment, Cindy was prepared. It made her feel good when she saw the shocked look on his face as they fell. While holding the knife steady and inches away from Trip's face, she pulled out her handcuffs, and that was when she realized he was not responding. She checked him for cuts and, not finding any, rolled him over on his belly and checked again. All she found was a huge knot on the side of his head, but his breathing seemed normal. He was out cold. She noticed the rock he fell on. That must have been what knocked him out.
She handcuffed him to the trunk of a fallen tree by positioning his arms around the trunk, bear-hug style. There was no way he could get loose. Large branches surrounded the trunk to the right and left of his arms. She stood up and radioed it in. "One down, out cold."
"Copy that," answered Wade.
~Excerpt from CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE
And then, this happens.
YAHREH, SCREENPLAY
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EXT. GINA’S NEIGHBOR'S BACKYARD
FS FBI AGENT GEORGE AND SURROUNDING AREA
FBI Agent George is hidden behind a huge Oak tree close to the edge of a deep ravine. He can hear Kinny climbing up the deep ravine from below.
FS THROUGH GEORGE'S NIGHT VISION GOGGLES
George observed the bushes jutting out from the ledge into the backyard next door. A couple of feet further back away from the ledge, more bushes and an old garage. George looks toward the neighbors backyard when Kinny appears from behind the bushes.
FS KINNY
Kinny starts walking around the bushes jutting out from the ledge next to the garage. When he reached the middle of the garage, a motion light is activated.
FBI Agent George has trouble getting his night vision goggles off. |
FS THROUGH GEORGE'S NIGHT VISION GOGGLES
George is blinded by the motion light and is having trouble getting his night vision goggles off. He struggles to remove them. Slivers of light shine periodically at the edge of the goggles while he tries to remove them.
FS GEORGE AND KINNY
Kinny rushes George.
HS OF GEORGE
George throwing his goggles off.
FS GEORGE AND KINNY
Trying to protect himself, George grabs Kinny's wrist. But Kinny, being faster than expected, dropped his gun and grabs George's gun-hand.
CU OF THE GUN
A hand-to-hand combat for George's gun.
FS GEORGE AND KINNY
George and Kinny twisting and turn, pointing the gun this way and that.
CU OF THE GUN
Kinny gets his hand around the gun and his finger on the trigger.
MS FBI AGENT GEORGE AND KINNY
The gun is close to George. A shot rings out. George tensed up when the bullet slices through his left buttocks.
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YAHREH is the screenplay of CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE and registered with Writers Guild of America West.
CAPTIVE DELIVERANCE is a Christian mystery thriller.
© 2012 Laveda D. Rockford
© 2018 Laveda D. Rockford
Dallas, Texas
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