SURPRISE IS NOT KNOWING: SCREENPLAY EXCERPT | Laveda D. Rockford

 SURPRISE IS NOT KNOWING: SCREENPLAY EXCERPT | Laveda D. Rockford


THE CASE OF THE BLACK PEARL RING

Screenplay excerpt

In the previous excerpt, the team was in the process of securing an elevator to carry them down to ground level. Through heroic attempts to secure the elevator, they finally succeed. Their attempt at providing protection for Wade and his son seem to be working.

Meanwhile, in the banquet hall,

TWO-SHOT

Brad and Ben watched the private conversations going on around the room.

BEN:

“I wish I knew what they were saying.”

 

BRAD:

“Yeah, but sometimes the surprise is not knowing.”

Brad answered with an emphasis on, not knowing.

 

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FS

The elevator bell rang announcing their arrival in the lobby hallway. Cindy and her team exit the elevator quietly, guns drawn. They get into formation with Wade in the middle and they proceed to the front lobby.


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