SOMETHING'S GOING ON: SCREENPLAY EXCERPT | LAVEDA D. ROCKFORD

Screenplay Excerpt

SOMETHING’S GOING ON: SCREENPLAY EXCERPT 

In the previous excerpt, the team exited the apartment. A while later, another serious situation happened and now they are silently listening for sounds.


THE CASE OF THE BLACK PEARL RING,

Screenplay Excerpt

 

***

FS

Cindy observed that the sound of footsteps came to an abrupt halt. She motioned for the team to hold.

CINDY:

“Stay put. Be on the ready, something’s going on,”

Cindy said quietly, thinking that someone might have seen the guard being pulled to the right after walking through the door. She glanced over at him thinking he was the issue.

 

***

FS

Shaitan leaned his head to the side listening, then motioned the guards upward and they continued slowly up the next flight of stairs. Then he peeked around the wall and looked upward, he saw movement which caused them to begin firing.

FS

They received return fire and a shoot-out commenced.

 

FS REAR

Shaitan moved back and shoved bodyguards in front of him, urging them on. He knew there was only one way to finish this impasse,

SHAITAN:

“MOVE UP!”

 Shaitan yelled to his group.

FS

One of the other guys overheard Shaitan.

 

 

OTHER GUY:

“Shaitan?”

FS

SHAITAN:

“Hold your fire.”

Shaitan said and pushed men out of the way and leaned past the wall while looking up the stairwell.

SHAITAN:

“Show yourself.”

***

© 2021 Laveda D. Rockford

The Case of the Black Pearl Ring is registered with Writer’s Guild of America West. If you would like to know more about this exciting screenplay, please contact me. Thank you

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Rockford Smiles: Christmas at our House | Laveda D. Rockford

Image
  Taking time to share a little Christmas at our House with you. I painted this ornament as a gift to my daughter and her husband. If they are reading this, sorry to spoil the surprise, but more gifts are on the way.  I hope that each of you who watch this little video receive a small respite from the worries of life. A little Christmas cheer for those who are in need. A little light to cast out all fear. A smile for you to hear. We are more than conquers, we are in Christ who strengthens us. The bride that awaits His return. God bless you and yours. Merry Christmas! Love always, Laveda D. Rockford © 2023 Laveda D. Rockford
Read more

Thanksgiving Thought | Laveda D. Rockford

Image
  Thanksgiving Thought During Thanksgiving, most people gather to share stories of their year and greet each other with great esteem. While Thanksgiving is not celebrated around the world, I wanted to tell those of you who will be gathering with your families this Thanksgiving to please remember to say a prayer for those people who are having a very difficult time. Though we, as humans, sometimes think that our little part of the world is the most important, we have to realize that there are difficulties the world around. Many people do not have money to fill their tables with a bounty of food. Other people do not have the money to go and see their family. Thank goodness for the modern capabilities that computers give us. We can see our family on Thanksgiving Day if time allows.   Then there are those who have lost loved ones this year, or years before this and are having a difficult time adjusting to the news or accepting the challenge to continue to live. In honor of your loved
Read more

I Live For Freedom | Laveda D. Rockford

Image
  I Live For Freedom As you know, I have been on vacation. It began on Monday morning in Missouri, and we arrived in Maryville, Tennessee that evening. The Lord graced us with beautiful sunshine every day that we were there. The first day we drove into the Great Smoky Mountains, around curves, up mountains, and into valleys all green and yellow that introduced the early autumn season. The beauty of it all gave me a piece of awe that you can only get when you know the love that was placed into such a sight as this. This is where my Cherokee ancestors lived. While there, I had the privilege of visiting the Museum of the Cherokee Indian in Cherokee, North Carolina. Between June 1838 through March 1839, approximately 16,000 Cherokee were removed from their tribal lands and relocated to Oklahoma. It is said that approximately 4,000 Cherokee died. My Great-Great Grandmother was six years old when she walked this trail. Her Mother, my Great-Great-Great Grandmother, was one of those 4
Read more